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Rusty Remnants

In a secret slot in my jewelry box
Lies half a silver locket
Battered…tattered…cherished

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Poet Destroyer A

November 22, 2012 at 4:53 PM

Nat, stopping by to wish you a happy thanksgiving ,,, hope your day is well....xox~pd

Kash Poet

March 4, 2012 at 10:44 AM

Natalie,congrats on your win.Loved it.Are you taking a break?

Wilma Neels

March 4, 2012 at 8:26 AM

Awesome Kimo Natalie, congratulations on your win in the contest :) love Wilma

Bob Quigley

March 4, 2012 at 8:18 AM

Very simply put. Nicely said Natalie

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2012 at 6:27 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Natalie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

March 3, 2012 at 9:39 PM

NAT,, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Debbie Guzzi

March 3, 2012 at 6:55 PM

awww but not rusty! silver doesn't rust! congrad's light & love

Bob Quigley

February 7, 2012 at 10:13 PM

We all have our treasures don't we Natalie. Congratulations

Mike Dailey

February 7, 2012 at 1:53 PM

You said an awful lot in those three little lines. Beautiful. Mike

Jslambert Mister Roboto

January 10, 2012 at 6:40 AM

those are the BEST keepsakes! I diGG your poetry and your cool as a cucumber in a bowl uh' hot sauce comment! U rock out!

Wilma Neels

January 1, 2012 at 12:08 PM

Gosh I love this Natalie :) Happy 2012 to you and your family :) Wilma

Gwendolen Song

December 29, 2011 at 3:27 AM

And I bet this rusty ole silver locket has MAJOR sentimental value! I love that this poem is a short and quaint as the precious image of your locket..it speaks volumes..U won't need any luck in that contest. ;) Hey, I wanted to thank u for your coments on Marlboro Woman Is Gone...I am thrilled that YoUR mom quit smoking 10 yrs ago..damage is being reversed. That is for sure. Conversely, your friend who struggles financially will need a huge wake up call, right? Happy Holly days, Gwendolen