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Rusty Remnants

In a secret slot in my jewelry box
Lies half a silver locket
Battered…tattered…cherished

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 PM

Nat, stopping by to wish you a happy thanksgiving ,,, hope your day is well....xox~pd

Kash Poet

Date: 3/4/2012 10:44:00 AM

Natalie,congrats on your win.Loved it.Are you taking a break?

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/4/2012 8:26:00 AM

Awesome Kimo Natalie, congratulations on your win in the contest :) love Wilma

Bob Quigley

Date: 3/4/2012 8:18:00 AM

Very simply put. Nicely said Natalie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Natalie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:39:00 PM

NAT,, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/3/2012 6:55:00 PM

awww but not rusty! silver doesn't rust! congrad's light & love

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/7/2012 10:13:00 PM

We all have our treasures don't we Natalie. Congratulations

Mike Dailey

Date: 2/7/2012 1:53:00 PM

You said an awful lot in those three little lines. Beautiful. Mike

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/10/2012 6:40:00 AM

those are the BEST keepsakes! I diGG your poetry and your cool as a cucumber in a bowl uh' hot sauce comment! U rock out!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/1/2012 12:08:00 PM

Gosh I love this Natalie :) Happy 2012 to you and your family :) Wilma

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/29/2011 3:27:00 AM

And I bet this rusty ole silver locket has MAJOR sentimental value! I love that this poem is a short and quaint as the precious image of your locket..it speaks volumes..U won't need any luck in that contest. ;) Hey, I wanted to thank u for your coments on Marlboro Woman Is Gone...I am thrilled that YoUR mom quit smoking 10 yrs ago..damage is being reversed. That is for sure. Conversely, your friend who struggles financially will need a huge wake up call, right? Happy Holly days, Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 12/24/2011 8:14:00 AM

Very nice Kimo here Natalie.Best wishes.