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Rusty Bikes

Four pedals rusting -- screech of bikes grates love’s uphill climb ................ Biker’s Dozen for Maureen McGreavy 10/3/2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/9/2018 5:06:00 PM

Hello Nette,these bikes were well used. You have memories with these bikes. Have a nic evening my friend.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/4/2018 7:58:00 PM

When I read the lines in reverse order, it seems like an accident created the rust. I can see it in my mind. Very interesting poem.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2018 10:55:00 PM

Love the appeals to the senses, nette. Congrats on a well-deserved win! Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2018 6:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.

Chris Green

Date: 10/3/2018 1:41:00 PM

This was great my friend. Very clever and creative use of the subject. I really enjoyed this.

Ashley Conte

Date: 10/3/2018 10:19:00 AM

How you use symbolism is amazing; the slow drag of biking reflects some loss of love. Impressive part of your design!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/3/2018 5:41:00 AM

Ride on dear Nette, your poems delight, whether long or short. as for the contest poem on spiritualist, I chose not to join cuz its a subject too close to the heart, I'd rather not compete . But thank you for your kindness, and caring Love always, Pixie