Rusted Iron Heart Contest

Her heart may appear solid,
But rust has started to form,
Left in isolation, through countless heavy storms,
Weaken, bare and brittle,
Pieces crumble away,
Even though it's made of iron,
Her heart has formed decay.

Contest: Rust

By; Sabina Nicole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 21, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Smile ˜ Amid this period of life and existence, tis often easy to find oneself in the pools of such thoughts and feelings etc. but, to gather the serenity in promise bound in assureds faith * Tis as being within a hot air balloon, floating away into a clear blue day * Ahhhh, soooo very peaceful and warm this, beyound the storms ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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