Russet Of August

Blossoms sheer as summer's face 
Decorate all of August's trees 
They flicker like red  trinkets bright
 And dips down with such ease.

The flowers gay as mist and spray
To nestle  by my feet 
Their flavor wafting with dawn's flair 
Oh citrusy and sweet.

Each  hillside dances  a ride
Robed in russet array 
Enticed by heat  of embrace
On this bold summer day!


   Contest Rhyme Verses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Scars Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:53 AM
wow, amazing poem sweet Nette, full of such wonderful imagery...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo
May Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Congrats on your win Nette..
Callus Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 4:41 PM
I applaud your poetic skill, and the technical deliverance, Nette. Such beauty begs reading more than once. I am always left in awe upon reading your delightful offerings. Hugs // paul
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Lovely, elegant, eloquent poesy, nette! Best wishes, Gershon
One Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Wow... great use of words Nette...
Krampe Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 4:43 PM
These are indeed verses of metaphors! Lovely imagery.
Man Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Nette, queen of metaphors! Your summer dance is a joyful romp to be sure.. vivid rays of sun blast over a perfectly worded canvas.. your write a skilled yet playful gypsy dance to be sure.. pure delight!!
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:27 AM
Red ink is your color, nette...great elegant write as per usual my friend...carry on poetess...love & light...^WW^
Michael Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:44 PM
I see you like it cool... a streak here and there of sunshine...not burning hot hot hot... A lovely inside of you in poem...Nice one...All the best
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:27 PM
I love this Nette, best wishes...
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 10:57 AM
A beautiful , refreshing poem Nette :)
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Wonderful imagery..beautiful poem, nette.
May Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 6:52 AM
A beautiful summer poem Nette..enjoyed
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Oh I think Luloo with love this beauty Nette! Such gorgeous imagery! : )
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:32 PM
A wondrous vision to behold, Nette.. your poem is metaphorically beautiful and riveting. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Godwin Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Loved frolicking thru this write. All the best in the contest and all else! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Very well done Nette, good luck!
Gonza Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:57 PM
The red flare of summer splashed with brilliant tints which end with a calming note! Elegant paint of metaphors.
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