Kim Merryman Poet Haiku

Russet Leaves Falling

russet leaves falling
                                         nonchalantly to the ground...
                                                naked limbs shiver




  Kim Merryman
  11/2/11
  Season word: russet leaves
   Strict Haiku contest

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Rosalyn Lampkin November 4, 2011 at 11:20 PM I love the vivid imagination you've captured and the title fits so well. Good luck in the contest. Rosalyn

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2011 at 9:05 PM love it love it love it!

Tony Lane November 4, 2011 at 4:49 AM Well written Kim. Tony

Margaret Foster November 3, 2011 at 8:17 PM Looking good Kim... cheers Margaret

Carolyn Devonshire November 3, 2011 at 2:22 PM A striking image with the naked limbs after the leaves nonchalantly fall, Kim. Best wishes for success in Charles' contest! Love, Carolyn