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Rushing Past

Days
rush past
each other
like ex-lovers
on busy sidewalks
who've forgotten
how to slow
treasured
days
May 30, 2020 Ninette Contest Emile Pinet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/22/2021 1:58:00 PM
Sad but true. You still okay Lady?
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 9/26/2021 5:39:00 PM
Yes. I'm fine, thank you. I don't get logged into Soup often enough. I hope you are well.
Date: 5/30/2020 9:22:00 PM
I enjoy this poem very much!
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 5/31/2020 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Dearheart.
Date: 5/30/2020 7:36:00 AM
An excellent Ninette, Rhoda, both as regards syllable count and the content itself. What a pity that many treasured days have gone to waste! Who knows...some might just have gone missing, and there is still a chance of being found again! ~ Best regards // paul
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 5/30/2020 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. I've read your Ninette and I love it! Your words always speak to me. I'm sure the days that have gone missing will reappear when I need them most. Hugs.
Date: 5/30/2020 6:14:00 AM
So true and so well said, Rhoda!
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 5/30/2020 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I've been missing Soup and will slowly return here. I've met many special people here.

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