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Rushing Past

Days
rush past
each other
like ex-lovers
on busy sidewalks
who've forgotten
how to slow
treasured
days


May 30, 2020
Ninette Contest
Emile Pinet

daylost lovetimeninette

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FJ Thomas

January 22, 2021 at 1:58 PM

Sad but true. You still okay Lady?

Rhoda Tripp

September 26, 2021 at 5:39 PM

Yes. I'm fine, thank you. I don't get logged into Soup often enough. I hope you are well.

Morgana Moon

May 30, 2020 at 9:22 PM

I enjoy this poem very much!

Rhoda Tripp

May 31, 2020 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Dearheart.

Paul Callus

May 30, 2020 at 7:36 AM

An excellent Ninette, Rhoda, both as regards syllable count and the content itself. What a pity that many treasured days have gone to waste! Who knows...some might just have gone missing, and there is still a chance of being found again! ~ Best regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

May 30, 2020 at 9:07 PM

Thank you, Paul. I've read your Ninette and I love it! Your words always speak to me. I'm sure the days that have gone missing will reappear when I need them most. Hugs.