Rush Hour

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At a bend in the road
One needs take utmost care,    
More so on road of life.” By author
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                                                  Rush Hour

                                        Hectic rush at day`s end
                                            Everybody in haste
                                      Traffic jammed at road bend
                                        Proceeding at snail`s pace
                                         Sound of sonorous smash
                                         Splits my dream in a rash.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2025 7:27:00 AM

Great! Congrats!

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/10/2025 8:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the above short poem and for your kind wishes. May you be blessed with a pleasant weekend.