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Name Of Contest ; Into The Hexaline Groove

Date Posted ; 9 th May 2025

Name Of Sponsor ; Nette Onclaud

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NB In my view the end of poem is ironic.

The high speed walker/sprinter at the start loses their traction

and become as slow as rush hour cars

Rush Hour

Mine  is a wild  spring step,
shoe heels dash leaf strewn path,
I spy wrinkled driver’s,
rueful rush hour grim mien,
from sleek chrome  cars  crawl as,
my drained feet  moult traction!

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