HEXALINE…it is a short verse made of 6 lines with 6 syllable counts per line…rhymed or unrhymed. The ending though must have an element of surprise …
She wakes me up, must go, She says drive quick not slow. Weaving though traffic fast. Now we get there at last. Such a hurry this morn. Too late, babe just now born.
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