Rush Hour

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HEXALINE…it is a short verse made of 6 lines with 6 syllable counts per line…rhymed or unrhymed. The ending though must have an element of surprise …

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She wakes me up, must go, She says drive quick not slow. Weaving though traffic fast. Now we get there as last. Such a hurry this morn. Too late, babe just now born.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2025 7:39:00 PM

Now that was a great end twist!! Sure hope this got a win

Jay Narain

Date: 5/6/2025 11:00:00 AM

nivr poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/10/2025 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Jay, glad you liked it.