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RUSH Green Lights Minutes Gone Dawn whisks in a flash Lost among zooms of speed Exiting from my blank life “ This heart throbbing in empty beats.” Jajosh Ongado Create Your Pyramid for nette onclaud 27May 2014

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Date: 6/16/2014 3:16:00 PM
i like how you expressed an absent life from too much hurrying, jajosh.. stunned!.. . belated congrats on your fine slot in my challenge!.. huggs
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Date: 6/14/2014 8:41:00 AM
I really like the empty beats line, congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2014 8:29:00 AM
Well done! Grats on the win, I love the ending line! awesome
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Date: 6/11/2014 11:59:00 PM
wow, I really like this one!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/11/2014 11:11:00 PM
Jajosh, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/11/2014 3:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win!
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:03:00 PM
WOW - just a fantastic write for a well-deserved win - Congratulations!!!
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:01:00 AM
Exiting from my blank life......wow, that line says so much......a great line and a great poem. Congratulations!!
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Date: 6/11/2014 9:44:00 AM
Jajosh. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/11/2014 6:31:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Jojosh
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Date: 6/11/2014 5:01:00 AM
Well done, Jajosh...a 7 rating for this pyramid! a pleasant rush from beginning to end! Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:32:00 AM
Mmmmn love the beats I see in between the lines... Kudos!!!!
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