Jajosh Ongado Poet Verse

Rush

RUSH
Green Lights
Minutes Gone

Dawn whisks in a flash
Lost among zooms of speed
Exiting from my blank life

“ This heart throbbing in empty beats.”


Jajosh Ongado
Create Your Pyramid for nette onclaud
27May 2014

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Nette Onclaud June 16, 2014 at 3:16 PM i like how you expressed an absent life from too much hurrying, jajosh.. stunned!.. . belated congrats on your fine slot in my challenge!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2014 at 8:41 AM I really like the empty beats line, congrats on your win.

Casarah Nance June 12, 2014 at 8:29 AM Well done! Grats on the win, I love the ending line! awesome

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2014 at 11:59 PM wow, I really like this one!! Congrats for your win.

Skat A June 11, 2014 at 11:11 PM Jajosh, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2014 at 3:16 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Faye Gibson June 11, 2014 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on a great win!

Pandita Sietesantos June 11, 2014 at 2:03 PM WOW - just a fantastic write for a well-deserved win - Congratulations!!!

Carrie Richards June 11, 2014 at 10:01 AM Exiting from my blank life......wow, that line says so much......a great line and a great poem. Congratulations!!

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2014 at 9:44 AM Jajosh. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta June 11, 2014 at 6:31 AM Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Jojosh

Paul Callus June 11, 2014 at 5:01 AM Well done, Jajosh...a 7 rating for this pyramid! a pleasant rush from beginning to end! Congrats on a merited win. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:32 AM Mmmmn love the beats I see in between the lines... Kudos!!!!