Runs Up and Down

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my dog runs all over the house , perches on the window seal ,and barks at everything that moves or makes a sound

jumping barking dog sun flows half open window tree leaves susurrate 10/2/2022

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/3/2022 4:09:00 AM

better the leaves that the barking dog.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/2/2022 9:43:00 PM

Pleasant images of happiness, Eve. Lovely! :)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/2/2022 3:56:00 PM

Love this one Eve my dog must be related to yours cause he acts the same way...lol

Eve Roper
Date: 10/2/2022 6:05:00 PM

Michael he is worse when I get in the shower, it makes me wonder if he just wants my attention and to say good boy.. He really response to those two words " Good Boy." Thank you for your visit. Many Blessings

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/2/2022 12:23:00 PM

I enjoyed this creative poem Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 10/2/2022 6:06:00 PM

Thank you , Heidi. Many Blessings friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2022 10:08:00 AM

very imaginative. Hugs.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/2/2022 6:07:00 PM

I see him doing this almost everyday :) Many Blessings my friend and many prayers for your daughter