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Running Water

Running water in the summer
Go in awashin' with soap
Now the creek is covered 
In overgrowth like a cloak

Staying with my aunt, clever was she
She'd say let's go swimming in the creek
She'd grab some towels, slip in the soap
Then we'd wash so we'd not reek

Loving, happy memories now
As I view her lovely face
Have you ever had an aunt so kind
It seemed she was cloaked in Grace

Now she's gone on to her reward
The trees, bushes now overgrown
Right up to the very creek she owned
How now going in awashin' I long  

In Remembrance Of Aunt Dolly Cochran Morgan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 3:28 PM
What a lovely tribute. I love how you remembered her with such images.
Harper Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Beautiful remembrance of this woman, this aunt of yours, very kind to have gifted it to her memory!
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Sheri, She was a special lady. She died such a horrible death from cancer of the plasma of the blood. I think they call it Multiple Myeloma ...There is treatment for it today but back then there wasn't much that could be done. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 3:47 AM
Such a lovely memory to share Sara, those beautiful memories stay with you forever. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Tom, Memories of a good sort are very special. I am blessed in having many of them. I appreciate you dropping by. Your comments are valuable to me. Sara
Ashley Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 8:53 PM
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your dear aunt, Sara. Such beautiful memories so lovingly remembered.. Warmest wishes to you and my condolences as well.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Susan, My aunt died around 35 years ago but we went by her old home and the creek this week end and these memories came flooding my heart so I wrote this one in honor of her. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Michael Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 6:28 PM
A wonderful write in her loving memory...Thank God you had her in your life...All the best Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Arturo, Yes, I am so thankful that I had this aunt in my life. She was a very special person. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 3:17 PM
This tribute to your dear aunt brought tears as I remember my aunt. We were closer than I was with my mother. We thought so much alike and I miss her dearly. A lovely memory created this beautiful poem Sara. : )
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Connie, I am glad that you shared your thoughts and feelings about your aunt. It is wonderful to have someone in our lives who loves us and we love them. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Kiser Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:26 PM
I had a great aunt who I remember that way; it was wondrous going to her home. A lovely sentiment for a favored aunt. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:55 PM
M.L., Awesome that you have an aunt whom you remember in a loving way. I hope that you will always have wondrous thoughts of her. Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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