Running River

The river runs deep and wide,
There isn’t a day gone by that we haven’t cried.
Our link to old wisdom and the beautiful past.
We tried to hold on with our weak human grasp.
The rushing water’s path of destruction,
Prohibits us from following your instruction.
We swim against the current, praying
We drag our bodies to the bank laying,
Face down in the sand barely out of the water
Searching for hope or some type of fodder.
To give us strength to finish the excursion,
Our hearts are weary from the prolonged immersion.
We will swim and wade in this river of sorrow,
Hoping, healing and happiness are held by tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rocheleau Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Enjoyed this very much. Nice Job!
Comporozos Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:16 AM
It's a great effort, true, emotional and optimistic in reality
Mcconnell Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 5:56 AM
great piece Jacob, really emotional wording bringing power to the whole piece, well done indeed, God bless, Gordon
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Jacob, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 6:37 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Jacob
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June 8, 2014 at 12:56 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jacob :) - I choose your first written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 3, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Jacob,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Vasquez Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Thanks for the Welcome SKAT. I have been writing off and on for about 10 years now. More off than on because of time, but reading and meditating on the works of this poet's society have really inspired me. I look forward to the friendship and indulging in your writings
Gibson Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Jacob. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Excellent write - well done!
Vasquez Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 12:45 PM
thank very much.
A   Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Jacob, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Fal Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Hi Really liked your poem. The river is running running. And we re dragged powerless.
Vasquez Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Yes we are. Thanks for your insight
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