Running Horses

Twilight is coming
after munching on meadow
horses love to run
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Adams Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Nice Haiku, Robyn. One of my favorite forms. good job.
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 12:37 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
Gupta Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Enjoyable haiku Robyn.....
A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Hi Robyn, MMM sometimes I wish I was a horse. LOL... Would you believe me if I told you, I have my own corral? :) Well I do, I have a Unicorn Corral. :) About your HAIKU. the imagery's awesome. Twilight, meadow and horses, what more could I ask for on a peaceful night. Hugs. LINDA
Campbell Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 10:12 PM
I love unicorns too, Linda. :-) We have a horse a horse farm here on a mountain in NC. I have loved horses since I was born. Mr. Ed is my charmer. It is peaceful, isn't it? Hugs, my friend.
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:24 PM
I am not gone yet, however, I miss our new friendship already. SKAT
Campbell Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Me too. Sorry. I've been down.
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful haiku my friend , well expressed , hugs / / :) dalia
Campbell Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Hugs, my friend. And a lot of them.
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:09 AM
nice haiku there Robyn
Campbell Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you. That means a lot. :-)
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:08 PM
- I can see the beautiful horses running in freedom, lovely haiku Robyn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Campbell Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise. I appreciate you reading it.
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Good morning, Robyn... Dropping by to say hi. I was hoping to read a new one from you. Hope you are well. Sending smiles. SKAT
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Please be happy... :(
Campbell Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:21 AM
I have been down, SKAT. I do have some. But I want to post a happy poem. Thanks for checking on me. :( Hugs, my friend.
Anish Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:52 PM
You stuck to the 5 75 format which is all to the good. Fine example of this form! Best Matthew Anish
Campbell Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:35 AM
Thank you, Matthew. I was really down. Your comment pulled me up.
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:03 PM
cute one. Horses are so fun to watch.
Campbell Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Andrea. They're fun to ride too! :-)
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Hello Robyn, this is more than a great haiku. I love the action on the last line. HA, maybe I should have been a horse. They don't seem to mind the exercise after a good munch. You painted a very beautiful picture under the twilight. Have yourself a beautiful and wonderful day. SKAT
Campbell Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:08 PM
SKAT, hug, hug, hug. I miss you already. Thanks for such great support and friendship. It means so much. You are my rock. XOXO
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:00 PM
lovely haiku Robyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Campbell Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Hey Jan, thank you, thank you. I love writing Haiku.
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