Running For My Life

}*{ A light rain drizzles through the humid morning air The sun slowly rising, as if without a care. Awakening the sleepy world to the dawn of a beautiful day I grab my trainers and im on my way. Refreshing liquid falls ever so smoothly, rejuvenating me Feeling alive, a gentle breeze, feeling free. The coldness emerges from the droplets, chilling my skin Running a solo race, that no one needs to win. My feet hitting the pavement, my body begins to happily rejoice This day is mine, what I do is my choice I run where my heart and soul are joyfully entranced My feeling of freedom, totally enhanced. To where im me and im running free Ill be fine, that I can guarantee.. }*{

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/22/2012 6:25:00 PM
You are fine! I know the feel of adrenaline but I never liked running now kick boxing yeah! Light & Love
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Date: 9/26/2012 10:58:00 AM
GREAT POEM LIKE THE PATTERN ALOT I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING AND THE FEELING FROM THIS ONE NICE XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/19/2012 10:56:00 AM
fery nice dreamweaver ilke this alot keppwriting
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Date: 9/18/2012 10:13:00 AM
Wow wonderful poem. I love the emotion of freedom in it. Just great! :)
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:36:00 AM
Sound like you are on the up and up girl, well done and good write xx
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:14:00 AM
TY Tracie. especially love the 5th line :)
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Date: 9/18/2012 6:54:00 AM
This is a quite rejuvenating write my friend! I truly love the wondrous poem that you have written, so powerful with the lovely words you have presented! I really love this delightful poem! Life can be so fleeting you must make the best of it every day, and you have found your little niche where you can improve your life, and I'm really happy about that! This is a beautiful piece, Tracie, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/18/2012 6:09:00 AM
Nice flow, nice rhymes, nice story, enjoyed the read.
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