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4/21/2025 for This or That, Vol 32 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Runner

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return" ~ from the song Nature Boy, written by George McGrew, aka eden ahbez, and recorded by Nat King Cole and others

A child born, unloved, in the winter cold
might like a river, from affection, run;
but like brittle bones when they get old, 
when colder still, might freeze, shrink from the sun. 

Afraid that warmth might make him break and crack, 
this sad, and lonely fragile entity, 
may view love as a frightening attack,
and a threat to his timid identity. 

To quote, "the greatest thing you'll ever learn
is just to love and be loved in return".
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Ibeh Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, David. I enjoyed it. "Nature Boy" by Nat King Cole. Boy, what a song...and singer!
Crandall Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 3:10 PM
Thanks Edward! True! I think I became aware of the song watching Moulin Rouge a few years ago.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 9:46 AM
What a powerful write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day writing away........
Crandall Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Thanks - yes, it's a great Spring Day here today! You too!
Suri Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 10:35 PM
Oh wow... this is touching. It explores vividly how the lack of affection can rot one's soul. Your piece is very poignant, along with the analogy of comparing a cold and bitter feeling to a winter. The way you develop the MC, showing that they are now afraid of love is truly compelling; indeed, we shall love and love back <3 have a great day, dear poet xxx
Crandall Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Hi Reya, thanks for your comments. It's great to hear it was affective and affecting for you! Have a great day!
Crandall Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Hi Reya, thanks for your comments. It's great to hear it was affective and affecting for you! Have a great day!
Nolan Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Wow! "may view love as a frightening attack" -this is sad and very true.
Crandall Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Thanks Amanda - I appreciate your visit and comment!
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