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Runaway Red Balloons For Pd

Red balloons I brought, escaped your hand, but you can hold my heart instead


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For PD.'s Contest # 5: Melt My Heart
2/9/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:12 AM
How lovely Carrie.. no wonder it is a great win.. big congrats!
Raven Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Hi Carrie, wonderful write, congratulations on your placement in Linda's contest.
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 6:51 PM
awww, so sweet, Carrie. It's a wee bit like mine!! Congrats for the win.
Nunez Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Sweet and heartfelt, Congrats and Happy Valentine's, Carrie! Kim
Callus Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:34 AM
How lovely and sweet, Carrie:) Truly words to melt the heart. ~ Congratulations on a fine win! ~ Regards // paul
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for melting my heart with your one liner. Stop by my latest blog "HOT AIR," if you'd like to view the lovely VALENTINES card I pinned for all the winning poems on my list. LOVE ~The Poet Destroyer~
Bauer Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 6:58 PM
very touching, carrie...
Allison Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:50 PM
aww how beautiful Carrie:-) hugs jan xx
Konos Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:46 PM
So beautiful Carrie but then your writings always are.....
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