OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'
RUMINATIONS sentiment glimmer in primitive gatherings approach then turn desert &continue to decay &rot soon forgotten reposing in a breadth of fine mesh piled high with translucent half-visions beyond the quaint mottled machinations
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