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Rum n Raisin 16 - Rhyme Time

Raisin said, “Let’s write a poem,
Let’s try to make everything rhyme
A Limerick; maybe a sonnet
Let’s write it in double quick time?”

Rum said, “Let me get us started,
I’ll make it an everyday tale
And if we write something artistic
An agent might put it on sale.

“We will have to keep it in memory
For kittens cannot hold a pen
And despite recent hype, we can’t even type
So let’s limit stanzas to ten.”

Those kittens sat ‘writing’ together
All day and well into the night
And when they were done Rum asked whether
They should edit or even rewrite 

Raisin said, “No, I don’t think so,
Let’s run through again and decide.”
Her recital was ‘read’ and, nodding, Rum said
“That should impress poets worldwide.”

So Raisin had thoughts that were forming
A plan that was worthy of note
“Let’s say it aloud in the morning,
So ‘Mummy’ can hear what we wrote.”

At seven a.m. the alarm clock
Awoke mum and dad from their rest
They silenced the clock and got quite a shock
As Rum gave the poem his best

Well, mum and dad listened intently
As their kittens recited away
“I think,” said their dad, “Those kittens are mad!”
For this was their poem that day….

Meow, meow, prrrr, mew, meow
Prrr, mew, meow, prrr, mew……….
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Kavanagh  Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Gertcha Cowson! I don’t know why that came to mind Terry, oh now I remember. This is outrageously brilliant, just like the Chas and Dave song, Rum n Raisin are reaching new poetic heights, Cheers David
Flood Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Ha ha… Thanks, David. I was struggling to come up with a new R&R adventure and also to offer up a less arduous read. Wasn’t sure it would work, but I think I got away with it.
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 10:06 AM
hahaha
May Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Lol, They wrote a couplet!, I enjoyed the read Terry
Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Way tooooo cute. When does the book come out with Rum & Raisin the authors??? Have a great day writing away........................
Flood Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Can’t believe I’ve arrived at Rum n Raisin 16, 18 if you count two specials. Can’t seem to let them go… but then why would I, when they seem to be so enjoyed. Thank you, Paula. Terry
Radice Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 11:01 PM
I'm sure you must have been a stand up comedian in another life..or maybe even this one perhaps? Whatever, you've sat down and given us another treat Terry. I don't know whether you are familiar with the work of the late great Gary Larson ('The Far Side') but I can see the punchline in this being the basis of one of his cartoons. Top write. Cheers - Gary
Flood Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 3:01 PM
Always enjoyed ‘The Far Side’, Gary. I remember that one or two would go over my head, but more often I would be explaining the gag to colleagues. Can’t for the life of me recall what newspaper I used to see them in. You might gather that I’m more than happy with the comparison. Thanks muchly. Terry
Bowring Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 1:19 PM
This is just too cute for words dear Terry. The darling kittens and their antics are perfect for reading out loud. I keep looking at the picture of them and you write them so endearingly that you would believe they were real ( I do! ) The genius flow with all your poems are always captivating. Loved it as always. Thank you. Keep them coming my friend :):)
Flood Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 4:36 PM
Thanks, Christina. I really want to get my teeth into another in-depth mega-write… my brain cells are clunky right now, but the premise behind this little stop gap amused me. Glad you’re still enjoying R N R. Terry
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 6:41 PM
ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Great stuff!
Flood Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Glad you got the gag, GW. Of course, if you hadn’t I doubt anyone would have done ;-)
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February 15, 2024 at 5:14 PM
Very clever Rum n’ Raisin are, I’d award them with a gold star. Loved it… Beryl
Flood Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Thanks, Beryl. I enjoyed working up to the cat-speak at the end because throughout the Rum N Raisin saga, few humans could understand ‘cat’. I had no idea if the gag would work or go down like a lead balloon, so I’m pleased that you enjoyed. Terry
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