Rum and Footles Don'T Mix

Some bum drank rum Fi - fie fo - fum Blood smelled he yelled Turned glum 'twas Mum

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2021 8:41:00 AM

A fun rum write. I do not drink but may be you need to put it in soda. I like my coffee and tea. Have a great/blessed day..................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 11:57:00 AM

Fast paced with a bit of charm.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/16/2021 5:09:00 AM

Charming, Gershon ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/13/2021 3:09:00 AM

Remember my first rum on the island of Guadalupe in the Caribbean, a run down bar full of locals, I can still feel it burning as it went down, happy memories. Hope you're well Gershon. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2021 11:11:00 AM

You remember your first rum? ... I remember my first Coca Cola. I was four years old; I teared up like crazy. No wonder it rips up the lining of your stomach! Now I stick to weak tea. lol. :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/12/2021 8:13:00 PM

(chuckle) Apparently they do...in this case!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2021 12:04:00 AM

Apparently so! ... Put 'em in the blender, Milt! :) gw