Rum and Coconuts

hey this wasn't written on Bikini Beach Island? WoW! I hope for your sake it wasn't! They really wined and dined them boys out there before they did those ''experiments'' ....yeh, and right after kicking the natives off their island. ---ANyway that is another story. Funny how beautiful poetry can conjure up nightmares! Or maybe that's just a funky chemical reaction with me! Ha! I do enjoy yir' stuff Jack!~

I'm not familiar with the contest, Jack but I do like this poem alot. Puts a smile on my face when reading it. I'm there. Lovely uplifting peaceful poem.

Short but very sweet xx

well how delightful is this scene Jack.. every line is filled with glowing imagery luv.. good luck.. and how are u feeling now?

An inviting scene indeed...wish I were there. Good luck in the contest.

Ah, I can envision this whole scene you have painted here! Who wouldn't want to be there just as you have described?! You have written a wonderful poem my friend! I've enjoyed your write completely! Great Work!!

WOW, I am impressed how well you did these last two contest entries. LOVE this. thanks for seeing several of my poems. I think I can actually go outside in the sun right now!! I gotta go really soon though before afternoon is finished.

Awesome, Jack. Makes me think of the Bahamas and Key West. They serve coconut rum there and when added to Coca Cola, it's quite a treat. Lovely description of the islands. Winning wishes headed your way! Love, Carolyn