Iolanda Scripca Poet Haiku

Ruins In Sandcastles

Scared to fall asleep
As tides rip open shelters
Of childhood castles...

Scared to lower bridge
As hopeful heart cries exposed
Under jogger's shoe...

Ephemeral  life
Whales eco-locate my soul
Tacit castles in the dusk...

for SKAT's Contest "Sand Castles"

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Sara Kendrick December 7, 2010 at 3:11 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2010 at 5:44 AM Congratulations on your win Iolanda in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2010 at 9:53 PM a GREAT trio there, Iolanda and well deserved win. Congratulations!

Kash Poet December 6, 2010 at 5:36 PM Congrats on your win.I liked this one very much-kashinath

John Freeman December 6, 2010 at 8:20 AM Congratulations Iolanda on your 5th place, You go girl! Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2010 at 4:28 AM I love this one!!!! images are excellent...congrats my poet friend...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 2:13 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Iolanda

Skat A December 5, 2010 at 9:31 PM Iolanda~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan December 5, 2010 at 8:36 PM Nice one Iolanda. Many congrats for this win.

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2010 at 5:20 PM Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Poet Destroyer A December 5, 2010 at 5:11 PM Well done, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.