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RUINED BACKYARD

RUINED BACKYARD

giant tree
standing guard
in my ruined backyard

rose bush
overrun by shoots
catches my sleeve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2012 3:11:00 PM
I'll bet its beautifully ruined though Daver; got to consider, as reading this post..)
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Date: 5/7/2012 6:54:00 AM
Oh Daver, you've got to love those "giant" majestic trees! It can't guard you so much when it comes to "overrun' rose bushes. Good thing you were wearing long sleeves!:) Have a great week!!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:40:00 AM
excellent
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Date: 5/3/2012 7:45:00 AM
Ow! love a wild backyard where the rose bushes hide ready to pounce. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:34:00 PM
ooo,,,i'm reading all your comments... maybe i got the image wrong.. it kind of looked like a drive by.. boy am I so wrong.. please... now i'm curious on what you where doing in your yard, when the shoots passed your sleeves.. good night for now...always..pd
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:29:00 PM
Daver, thank you for the wonderful comment.. your haiku's, are proceeded in the back hands of your time.. i hope no one got hurt.. i'm beginning to think you live in a bad neighborhood. I'm glad your tree can be protecting when least expected.. enjoyed.... have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2012 10:10:00 AM
Yep! Drive by shootings ... drugs...gangs. I love my house, though. They'll have to shoot me to get rid of me. Love, daver
Date: 5/2/2012 8:24:00 PM
Daver, I think these are marvelous haiku!! REally enjoyed them. (especially that last one)
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Date: 5/2/2012 7:20:00 PM
Wonderful imagery,great poem dear poet....Elliott
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Date: 5/2/2012 7:09:00 PM
I so can picture this write Dave. I figure in another 20 years, my back yard will look the same...unless Noah is through with college, and wants to prune ! Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful day....much love, james
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:53:00 PM
sounds like my yard - =)!
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