Rudimentary Existence

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Lonely repose in the calm lake make sense for sake birds flock to show, nests build so low. Sunbeams brightly through my locked gaze spring is on rise soul is quite live, Biding revive. Not deemed useless, the deeds recall due to time fall wicked blunder, kindred wonder. Written: July 18, 2021 A BRIAN STRAND your pick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:48:00 AM

A rudimentary existence would ensure the problems faced today would not exist but we have become so sophisticated...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/20/2021 12:15:00 PM

That's true, Delice, and we have to admit that sophistication is the source of our turmoil. I appreciate your comment. Blessings and kindest regards

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/18/2021 11:12:00 PM

Splendid write with great imagery. Splendid photo. Wonder what place is that.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 3:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor your kind words are so much appreciate, that photo was taken in Mexico.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2021 5:33:00 PM

Your poem is vividly descriptive of the beauties of nature and mankind's "blunder" in failing to care properly for the earth. I hope I didn't misinterpret. Janice

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 3:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Janice, you’re right, what mankind did to Mother Earth is beyond imagination, appreciate your kind words

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/18/2021 3:27:00 PM

Awesome photo, Lasaad---and so is your poem. You executed this form well. Hard to do in 8-4-4 rhymes. All the best.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/18/2021 3:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Vijay, and yes, it wasn't easy to write. It takes a good amount of time. have a great evening

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/18/2021 3:26:00 PM

Hello Tayeb Lasaad, I wanted to redo my comment to tom and deleted your comment to me on my new poem instead. Sorry. Please return you comment to my new poem. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/19/2021 4:11:00 PM

Hello Tayeb, Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/18/2021 3:53:00 PM

Its already done Darlene, thanks