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Rudimentary Existence

Lonely repose in the calm lake
make sense for sake
birds flock to show,
nests build so low.

Sunbeams brightly through my locked gaze 
spring is on rise
soul is quite live,
Biding revive.

Not deemed useless, the deeds recall
due to time fall
wicked blunder,
kindred wonder.


Written: July 18, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 7/20/2021 10:48:00 AM A rudimentary existence would ensure the problems faced today would not exist but we have become so sophisticated...Delice Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/20/2021 12:15:00 PM That's true, Delice, and we have to admit that sophistication is the source of our turmoil. I appreciate your comment. Blessings and kindest regards

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/18/2021 11:12:00 PM Splendid write with great imagery. Splendid photo. Wonder what place is that. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/19/2021 3:22:00 AM Thank you so much Victor your kind words are so much appreciate, that photo was taken in Mexico.

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/18/2021 5:33:00 PM Your poem is vividly descriptive of the beauties of nature and mankind's "blunder" in failing to care properly for the earth. I hope I didn't misinterpret. Janice Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/19/2021 3:20:00 AM Thank you so much Janice, you’re right, what mankind did to Mother Earth is beyond imagination, appreciate your kind words

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/18/2021 3:27:00 PM Awesome photo, Lasaad---and so is your poem. You executed this form well. Hard to do in 8-4-4 rhymes. All the best. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/18/2021 3:52:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind words, Vijay, and yes, it wasn't easy to write. It takes a good amount of time. have a great evening

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/18/2021 3:26:00 PM Hello Tayeb Lasaad, I wanted to redo my comment to tom and deleted your comment to me on my new poem instead. Sorry. Please return you comment to my new poem. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/19/2021 4:11:00 PM Hello Tayeb, Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend. Sotto Poet Date: 7/18/2021 3:53:00 PM Its already done Darlene, thanks