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Ruddy Illumination

The bedazzling sun
envades the saffron valley
as fog protects elms.


Entered in Raul Moreno's contest,
" Nature's Breath "

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Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2010 at 10:54 PM

Andrew, I think it was you sent me a soupmail today? It didnt' go thru. I better check and be sure it was from you. Just curious what it was. If it was you, please resend! Goodnight now, andrea

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2010 at 9:31 PM

I love YOURS too here, Andrew. saffron valley, such a lovely way to describe the color. I was trying to think of a unique word like that and was almost gonna use tangerine. haha. LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

April 26, 2010 at 1:00 PM

enjoyed reading

John Freeman

April 26, 2010 at 11:19 AM

Congratulations on # 4 Andrew. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 26, 2010 at 5:35 AM

Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. perfect words for the photo in such an eloquent manner.. enjoy my dear friend.. Eric Edward says "hello" ...luv.. "Sweetheart"