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I spent my entire day shopping for priceless rubies,  Rubies are unquestionably fiery, rubies are outright enchanting!  For my daughter’s approaching wedding, I scoured countless stores,  She must look gorgeous and absolutely stunning!  I travelled faraway to exotic India and hounded the exuberant jewellers,  My daughter must wear phenomenal rubies red,   On her sumptuous wedding day, I must make sure,  She looks resplendent, dazzling, and the loveliest!  I was frantically desperate to find the mystical gem,   Rubies are jaw-dropping, rubies are deliriously rare,  It was utterly understandable that I had to spend a wild fortune,  Finding the alluring jewel right for my beloved daughter! Mythical rubies embody everlasting love and fervent passion,  Endless energy and infinite power rubies symbolize,  My daughter is protected from all adversaries and negative entities,  And mercifully blessed with a zest for life.  From a chirpy, bubbly, lass to a blushing, breathtaking bride, Life's fascinating, intriguing journey has begun, An enigmatic ruby from her doting mother, a priceless gift, With all the celestial blessings showered! A Brian Strand Rhymed Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/9/2020 2:15:00 PM
Hello Maya, Oh I do hope that you find the rubies for your daughter's wedding. As well for yourself. I like the rubies to. A lovely red colour. Enjoy your day my friend.Love. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2020 5:44:00 PM
Hello Mala, This poem is so beautifully done. Enjoy your evening my friend love Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene! Your kind comments always bring so much happiness! You too - enjoy your day! Love, Mala

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