Rubies For Her

I spent my day shopping for rubies
I was on tenterhooks to make a choice
Rubies displayed on shelves glittered
And seeing the price tags I lost my voice!

Rubies' purity measured in carats 
Their colors linked to zodiac sign
It was not easy job to choose one
With so many variations, I pined.

Seeing me grim, girl on counter smiled
"May I help you", she calmed me down
Given my budget, zodiac sign of my love
She helped me zero on to a Ruby crown.

Thanking her profusely, I left the gem store
A full day had been spent to buy this Ruby
Gleefully, my love accepted my day's labor
Hugged me like a scooby dooby do booby.

I let go of shopping pains, felt great
A candle light dinner in down town
As a return gift, I will cherish it forever
I am now more confident shopping a crown.

25.7.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Chutani Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:51 AM
Thanx Beata.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Loved the beautifully penned muse Mohan. The end is so delightful. Congratulations on your win! Keep writing and inspiring :)
Chutani Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:52 AM
Aditi, thanx.
Canerdy Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Mohan, this is absolutely delightful--especially line 16! Janice
Chutani Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Janice, thanx for appreciating.
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