Rubies and Crows

Three crows pecked away the heart rubies
from an ice cream coned childhood dream.
When the crows weren't gorging and preening 
They'd layer black caw over all of the sweet dream.

These three hags, and I, have grown old and bitter together.
Forever taunting from ruby-stained beaks.

I don feathers from a fractured past.
Minted as trophies atop a foamy nightcap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Richards Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Wow....this is a though provoking and deeply rooted poem, Anthony. I hope it is fictional....and doesn't not speak of a personal past. You are an amazing poet! Which makes me even more pleased....and honored to be among those you selected from your recent contest. Thank you very much :)
Dutta Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 7:56 PM
last two lines are amazing. I admire.
Gentry Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Awesome imagery! I like... donning feathers from a fractured past. Well done!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Stunning imagery, fond I am of corvids and their rich poetics. Fabulous evocative piece! xomo
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