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Rubicund Invitation

blushing teenager
ruby cheeks, cerise hot lips,
given coral rose.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2021

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January 10, 2021 at 11:11 PM

Oh such a joy to read this adorable Senryu dear Victor ~ thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Angela Crabtree

January 10, 2021 at 1:56 PM

Beautiful poem, Victor. You're image and words are perfect :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2021 at 12:25 PM

I like the comment "colorful and adorable" that fits it exactly.

Anitha Jayasankar

January 10, 2021 at 9:11 AM

Bright, colorful and beautiful Victor.. Have a blessed day ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 9, 2021 at 8:25 PM

Colorful and adorable! :=)

January 9, 2021 at 7:18 PM

Victor, A Senryu flushed in bright color. Fresh in blush as any sunset. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 9, 2021 at 12:29 PM

- Very sweet, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 9, 2021 at 12:10 PM

Beautiful Victor. So much said in so few words. Excellent as always. God Bless, JB

January 9, 2021 at 11:01 AM

Cerise hot lips, unique and super cool phrase.

January 9, 2021 at 10:42 AM

Very descriptive work. Way to go if for a contest. I appreciate your kind review of my work. Sara

January 9, 2021 at 9:07 AM

Great imagery and feelings, Victor. Hugs Eve

January 9, 2021 at 5:50 AM

And she loved it--that was the start of a great romance. Lovely poem, Victor.

January 9, 2021 at 5:08 AM

WoW! Victor, In a few words, you penned a very romantic write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis

January 9, 2021 at 4:20 AM

Quite a romantic senyru Victor, girls love flowers. Tom

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