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Rpm's

the rpm's are starting to slow the spin--taking a new spin each revolution takes on new light as minutes fall in line with clarity..clear like crystal thunderous wonder sweeps with the speed of sound it reaches across the mountain's peak it catches me off balance with stealth from my blind-side it enraptures, complete surrender embracing all that I find

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 6:16:00 AM
thanks for the suggestion...I see what you mean. I did change it. Thanks for reading..JB
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:04:00 AM
really really like the imagery and word chose...1 suggestion..second to last line...perhaps......rapture....surrender...you don't need the I...who else would it be? ;) Light & Love
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