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If you've ever been alone
as if your very being has flown
launch loving care
to those in despair
in light of the darkness you have known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 23, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thank you, Jan. Your kind words--all of them--are music to my ears. I recently read somewhere that loneliness is a major killer. Perhaps that is what caused me to write this poem. hugs x x x
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January 23, 2017 at 9:04 AM
You depict loneliness so vividly I like the uplifting ending Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 23, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Beautiful, Paul. You have a gentle soul:)
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January 23, 2017 at 10:19 AM
That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me--that I have a gentle soul. Thank you Daniel. I couldn't be more grateful.
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