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Round and Round

Turning round and round is the crazed world of my young adult youth mind. A mind that like a hamster's wheel, races and races until it is exhausted. Exhaustion that pulls it out of reality and enters into a spinning circle of fear like hiding in the closet of the Soul. Fear races in its heart and strains the strength that has been built. Through this fear, the mind is suffocating; no air, no breathing. Through all the suffocation, it finds some type of cool breeze. A cool breeze of relaxation as the waves rock back and forth with great agility. No longer is there any fear, suffocation, or exhaustion, but simply true relaxation, peace, and tranquility. It is confusing on how the mind works like that. One moment it finds itself in total pain and then the next it is relaxed, peaceful, and tranquil. I wish my mind worked like; to stay with the goodness that is within.

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Date: 6/3/2010 11:22:00 AM
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Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Bernadette, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2010 2:01:00 PM
Congrats Bernadette... on this lovely poem of reality, perception....
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations Bernadette, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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