Rough To Smooth

Rough stones on seashore-
wavelets sweeps surface of stones
and made them so smooth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 18, 2009 at 12:13 PM
So much truth captured in just three lines. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 17, 2009 at 2:41 AM
A beauty indeed..thank you for sharing... Always, Farah
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September 16, 2009 at 5:19 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Ismael. Excellent. Love,Carol
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