Rough Sailing

Tributaries meet
Splash, flash, gush, and rush converge
Whitewater rapids
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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October 12, 2008 at 10:32 AM
wow this is great, a true disccription of water rapids flowing so fast, and sometimes our life seems like its a rough sail in the same way, but in my storms of trouble i have the greatest helper of all, thank you for all your kind words in your feedback on my poems it means a lot my fathers name was joseph, , bless you from diane
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