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Rotten luck

Pardon me for saying so
that puts us in a precarious position
~ seems we're out of options



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:15 PM
sounds hopeless
Gauthier Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:51 AM
sometimes life seems that way ~ a good night sleep and the morning sometimes brings to light new possibilities
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