Rotten

rotten apple splats 'pon ground.... firm apple rolls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 28, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Ha good one. Sara
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November 22, 2015 at 2:22 PM
- A good haiku, Sara - I wish you a wonderful new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 22, 2015 at 6:26 AM
wow, great juxtaposition in line 3, sara...good apples stand out!..huggs
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