Rosy Dawn

ripping veil of night  
sun brushes glowing pink lights
on trees and facades
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Zerlaut Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:49 AM
This is an extremely awesome Haiku. I absolutely love the ending word if it's meaning isn't based upon the face of a building and instead upon covering or concealing one's true feelings. It speaks to me of the fact that nothing hides from the sun, not even painted expressions and words.
Agustin Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... Thanks for your uplifting comment. God bless you.
Empress Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 6:44 AM
This is absolutely stunning! Gorgeous and very descriptive imagery! Loved reading this rosy gem!
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