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Roses of Eden

Roses of Eden. Deep in the roots of the Garden of Eden, I laid my eyes upon dark roses which were hidden. Roses that had never been touched Just constantly torched. Burnt because of their black petals In a world were majority prefers bright petals. Dark roses that had always remained untouched, Constantly blocked from having their beauty unleashed. Even though it said colour does not matter, Yellow, Red roses are always seen as better. Yellow, Red roses are always picked, Making Dark roses to be outshined. Dark roses Yellow roses Red roses At the end, they are all beautiful roses of the same garden. Even the rain chose to have all roses showered Without considering how their petals are coloured. Even when seasons change All kinds of roses age. It does not matter what colour are its petals Because at the end they are all roses with petals. Dark roses Yellow roses Red roses At the end, they are all beautiful roses of the same garden. I lay my eyes in these deep roots of this Garden of Eden And all I see are beautiful roses, Not roses with different colours on their petals. Just beautiful roses of the same Garden.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 10:20:00 PM
Malebu, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:48:00 PM
Deep & Beautiful, Malebu, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2015 8:33:00 PM
A rose is a rose no matter what color - they are all beautiful - just like people! This is such a wonderful piece - love it and rate it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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