Roses haiku

Originally written in Japanese Bara Bara no utsukushi-sa musei no kanashimi ochi ai no kukyo ato Translation : Roses The beauty of roses The silence sadness of falling The emptiness of love

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/22/2024 6:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Peonieslore xo

Date: 6/18/2024 5:15:00 PM

kireii, love this! haikus these days are pretty wild so it's my first time seeing a good one!