Roses

this is a poem my daughter savannah wrote 
to me when she was 5, she is now 15.....and 
i have it in a frame on my nightstand.


         i love my daddy

       he smells like roses

       he is so handsome

         when he poses


     i love my dad so much


   by savannah leigh green

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Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2011 at 6:28 PM

rereading this one. Such a delight.

Poet Destroyer A

December 27, 2011 at 10:49 PM

Hello, John...how are you? Better yet how are the holidays treating you? I'm ok..a but busy with my blogs... And trying to accomplish two masterpiece poems before the year ends.... Roses are my favorite icon ever... Love the comment I left on the bottom... And about my coffee poem...lol.. No I don't drink it... He he,he... Can you imagine me..adhd.. Thanks for your comment as always... P.d

Gwendolen Song

December 22, 2011 at 3:53 PM

YOU SMELL LIKE ROSES???? Then there is something very WRONG with you!! ha ha. I am totally kidding. This is sweet and warming. It says much that you framed it and placed where you rest your head each day...you must be one thankful DAD! ......Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

December 10, 2011 at 10:55 PM

this is so sweet. She was only five when she wrote this? My gosh, if she is still writing, she must be incredible by now!

Elizabeth Wesley

July 10, 2011 at 9:06 PM

What a delightful verse. Your little one must be very special!

Elizabeth Wesley

July 10, 2011 at 8:41 PM

What a delightful verse. Your little one must be very special!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

June 24, 2011 at 12:04 AM

CooL one from the Little one!

Sarah Seraphin

May 29, 2011 at 3:19 PM

* “Sooo Sweeet * I Absolutely Love & Simply Adore * The Fragrant Delight of Lovely Roses * Smile * Dear Precious & Sweeet John. * Tis A Special Spirit to Held Amid Such Admiration & Love. * Lovely * Thanks for Making Me Smile With Your Perfumed Coms * Very Kind * Beautiful Poem * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Cory Long

May 28, 2011 at 8:34 AM

this is cute.. check out my daughters first poem. cory

Matt Hunt

May 27, 2011 at 4:08 PM

She did a great job John. I know it touched your heart:)

Anne Rutherford

May 27, 2011 at 3:40 PM

John you must be so proud of this sweet child of yours. You and Savannah are very lucky to have a bond so great . I can feel the love . Superb Savannah . Anne

John Aaron Green

May 26, 2011 at 7:09 PM

My daughter is so shy, she said she was mad at me for posting it,,lol, i want her to post on P.S. because,,, i know she is a great poem writer,,,thank you so much my friends for the kind comments about roses,,my daughter and i had so much fun reading them...she could not believe it..........you guys rock.....

John Aaron Green

May 26, 2011 at 7:11 PM

and you should of seen her face,,i almost cried it was so amazing...

Poet Destroyer A

May 26, 2011 at 11:14 AM

I'm smiling at Your Savannah... a wonderful poem to share with us, john... I don't think my daddy smelled like roses... But, i did write him a roses are red and why is my daddy blue poem one time.... You never know what we think once we get are rhyming going on.... This is a wonderful treasure to share with us... take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 26, 2011 at 7:47 AM

oh so sweet when children do these lovely gestures to parents.. my sons have always written beautiful things to me as well John.. a refreshing and delightful read ..from a sweetie pie.. hope u enjoy a happy holiday weekend ..be safe luv..

Skat A

May 26, 2011 at 5:50 AM

John, I can't help but smile. Now this is a poem worth keeping! Keep it near your heart and framed, read it every night with a blomming smile. And say "I can't believe I smelled like a roses." (J.K.) A lovely treasure for any father.. Have a lovely day ~luv*SKAT