Rose-Quartz Haze

When jade Specks of desire carved a raven calamitous shape of coal-crescent, losing the last soil once
My lilac heart of rouge runes, shimmered in galaxy, lathered with embers of laced life for soul of thou
I float in rose quartz haze befogged upon starlit symphony's hymnal moondust, strolling in perfumed 'You'.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 2:45 AM
BTW, a miniature thunderstorm.
Beaufort Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 2:44 AM
To echo what's been said, you pick images that ring so true. Rose quartz does have an interesting cloudiness, and I never thought of it in this light. If you press on quartz with another object and try to scratch it in the dark, you can see it spark internally due to piezo electricity? Crystals are so interesting and you select so many.
Romios Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Fabulous, original poetry,Hiya. Outstanding imagery… . Thank you for your work. Panagiota
Poet Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 3:44 PM
Hiya, I must say your poetry is exquisitely crafted. It soars far above the average, showcasing a remarkable level of skill and artistry. Each piece is a breathtaking work of beauty. The final one truly captivated me, leaving me in awe of its sheer brilliance. It is a masterpiece that transports the reader to a world of wonder and enchantment. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:15 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/lovely write. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away............
Rose  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Your words are amazing Hiya, your blessed, and so am I for reading this :)
Tor Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:08 PM
Such lovely words shared here Hiva...
Lindley Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:00 AM
A very beautiful love painted in these fine verses my friend. "Yours are as three beats of a loving heart. Fragrance of love and jasmine thus wedded. And kissing of stars and moon for or start. Sweet cool summer night we will be bedded." Afav . God bless.
Narain Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Well penned ninetts. I love them all.
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Hiya, there is a place in Australia, where every path is lined with large rose quartz crystals. It is a wondrous place as is your beautiful poetry. Your magic phrases in your Ninettes reminded me of the Chrystal Castle as I strolled through it with a loved one. Your poetry is breathtaking. Best wishes from SV.
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Very romantic one you have penned in this creative decorated stones of the earth poem. Your vision laid before us tells us that you really love this person. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:31 AM
- All are beautifully written, Hiva ... my favorite is the last one ... it's wonderful :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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