Rosebud Blanket Bouquet

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Tribute to a little 5 year old girl I knew - Lucy

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/25/2023 1:05:00 AM

Congrats Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Speaks Volumes!

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/24/2023 12:25:00 PM

This one sears into the psyche Kim, tragic and poignant, congratulations in the contest, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/25/2023 11:30:00 AM

I hope you’re right Kim, I really do!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, David! I think about the hymn - when we all get to heaven…what a day of rejoicing that will be…

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/24/2023 5:10:00 AM

BIG congrats on your win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:39:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay!

JCB Brul

Date: 7/24/2023 4:47:00 AM

Powerful short poem. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:38:00 AM

Thanks JCB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2023 3:24:00 AM

So sad when one so young dies today in our society that has so many modern inventions to keep life going. I feel for you her friend and the parents and all her family. The death will make its mark on all of them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2023 5:38:00 AM

Lucy was such a sweet little girl who told people about Jesus. I remember her playing with my granddaughter. She survived brain tumor but radiation did her in.