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Tribute to a little 5 year old girl I knew - Lucy

Rosebud Blanket Bouquet

perforates pine box
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Congrats Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Speaks Volumes!
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 12:25 PM
This one sears into the psyche Kim, tragic and poignant, congratulations in the contest, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:30 AM
I hope you’re right Kim, I really do!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, David! I think about the hymn - when we all get to heaven…what a day of rejoicing that will be…
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:10 AM
BIG congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Brul Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Powerful short poem. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thanks JCB
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 3:24 AM
So sad when one so young dies today in our society that has so many modern inventions to keep life going. I feel for you her friend and the parents and all her family. The death will make its mark on all of them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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July 25, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Lucy was such a sweet little girl who told people about Jesus. I remember her playing with my granddaughter. She survived brain tumor but radiation did her in.
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