Rose Petals of a Blue Moon

Lay low your sweet head, my simple sin
Soft eyes flutter like a butterfly wing.
Sweet breaths you take
Flourishing thoughts,Your gentle touch hypnotised ache.
Precious with each platinum kiss, bends and twists my craddled mind,
Sleepwalking my heart into a stardust whirlwind.
Eyes glistening, swollen blue moons,
Tredding softly through a silent night of our signature tune.
Intimate beneath the stars,planting seeds,
Snow falls on a garden that bleeds.
Your love bitten on my cheek, my juvenile phase, 
Rose petals fall, while your fragrence stays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:55 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 25, 2016 at 7:21 PM
NICOLA, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Medina-Rosas Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 7:22 PM
beautiful
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 6:54 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nicola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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