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Rose: Her Feeble Voice

I blossom and brighten up your day with a smile, dazzling. I sway, sway gently to your soul's sweet song. Dewy cheeks fresh, smooth, scent pristine cheer you - but you crush me!
Date: 06/14/2021 For Kim Merryman's Waltz Wave Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/12/2021 4:34:00 PM
Your pen has a unique touch dear Ani! It leaves indelible marks….Blessings!
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Date: 7/6/2021 3:41:00 PM
Belated congratualtions, Anitha. Beautiful descriptive verse! What a dramatic ending! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/5/2021 7:45:00 AM
Dear Ani, I have missed you and am happy reading your lovely lines! A dance for sure I sway, sway gently to your soul's sweet song. Belated Congratulations..Big hugs .. Be well. Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 6/26/2021 2:53:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive waltz wave, Anitha! I wasn't expecting that ending and it gave me a chuckle. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/26/2021 9:03:00 AM
Well there was this one, but I already congratulated you here. Are you entering Brian's contests? He is giving lots of wins lately. I hope you will enter some of your beautiful poems into his contests! (like that pantoum you wrote. I think you wrote one, didn't you?)
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Date: 6/24/2021 9:31:00 PM
I am coming back to congratulate you. It's beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:44:00 PM
Your poem was one of my very favorites in this form, Anitha. Back with my congratulations.
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Date: 6/24/2021 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Anitha. You desreve it with this very well penned poem. Blessings and regards
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Date: 6/15/2021 2:28:00 PM
Curses on those who crush the rose! As you know from my FB pictures, I adore roses and I really like your tribute to the rose right here!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:29:00 PM
Yes I know my dear friend... Thank you for your lovely comment... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 6/15/2021 7:34:00 AM
I read christuraj Alex comments below. Hope all is well with you. Take care
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:28:00 PM
Why Rama... Am ok my friend... Thank you.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 6/15/2021 2:13:00 AM
Wonderful. How are you? Keep well. Praying.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.. Am ok.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 6/15/2021 1:12:00 AM
I used to be a good dancer. Should I come to dance with you? Alas, now I'm old.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:26:00 PM
Ha.. Thank you for the visit and comment Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 6/14/2021 8:25:00 PM
Hi Anitha, This is a good entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Alexis... You too have a great day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 6/14/2021 6:33:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/16/2021 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Gina... Hugs.. ~ Ani

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