Anitha Jayasankar Poet Verse

Rose: Her Feeble Voice

I
blossom
and
brighten
up your day
with a
smile, 
dazzling. 
I sway, sway
gently to your
soul's sweet song. 
Dewy
cheeks
fresh, smooth, 
scent pristine
cheer you -
but 
you crush
me!


Date: 06/14/2021
For Kim Merryman's Waltz Wave Poetry Contest

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JC Brul July 12, 2021 at 4:34 PM Your pen has a unique touch dear Ani! It leaves indelible marks….Blessings!

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 6, 2021 at 3:41 PM Belated congratualtions, Anitha. Beautiful descriptive verse! What a dramatic ending! Love ~ Mala

Susan Lawrence July 5, 2021 at 7:45 AM Dear Ani, I have missed you and am happy reading your lovely lines! A dance for sure I sway, sway gently to your soul's sweet song. Belated Congratulations..Big hugs .. Be well. Blessings, Susan :)

Kim Merryman June 26, 2021 at 2:53 PM A beautifully descriptive waltz wave, Anitha! I wasn't expecting that ending and it gave me a chuckle. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2021 at 9:03 AM Well there was this one, but I already congratulated you here. Are you entering Brian's contests? He is giving lots of wins lately. I hope you will enter some of your beautiful poems into his contests! (like that pantoum you wrote. I think you wrote one, didn't you?)

Christuraj Alex June 24, 2021 at 9:31 PM I am coming back to congratulate you. It's beautiful work. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2021 at 5:44 PM Your poem was one of my very favorites in this form, Anitha. Back with my congratulations.

Sotto Poet June 24, 2021 at 2:37 PM Congratulations on your contest win, Anitha. You desreve it with this very well penned poem. Blessings and regards

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2021 at 2:28 PM Curses on those who crush the rose! As you know from my FB pictures, I adore roses and I really like your tribute to the rose right here!! Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:29 PM Yes I know my dear friend... Thank you for your lovely comment... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani

Rama Balasubramanian June 15, 2021 at 7:34 AM I read christuraj Alex comments below. Hope all is well with you. Take care Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:28 PM Why Rama... Am ok my friend... Thank you.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex June 15, 2021 at 2:13 AM Wonderful. How are you? Keep well. Praying. Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:27 PM Thank you Christuraj.. Am ok.. God bless.. ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar June 15, 2021 at 1:12 AM I used to be a good dancer. Should I come to dance with you? Alas, now I'm old. Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:26 PM Ha.. Thank you for the visit and comment Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani

Alexis Y. June 14, 2021 at 8:25 PM Hi Anitha, This is a good entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:26 PM Thank you Alexis... You too have a great day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Regina Mcintosh June 14, 2021 at 6:33 AM Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:25 PM Thank you Gina... Hugs.. ~ Ani