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Rose: Her Feeble Voice

I
blossom
and
brighten
up your day
with a
smile, 
dazzling. 
I sway, sway
gently to your
soul's sweet song. 
Dewy
cheeks
fresh, smooth, 
scent pristine
cheer you -
but 
you crush
me!


Date: 06/14/2021
For Kim Merryman's Waltz Wave Poetry Contest

Copyright © Anitha Jayasankar | Year Posted 2021

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JCB Brul Date: 7/12/2021 4:34:00 PM Your pen has a unique touch dear Ani! It leaves indelible marks….Blessings! Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/6/2021 3:41:00 PM Belated congratualtions, Anitha. Beautiful descriptive verse! What a dramatic ending! Love ~ Mala Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 7/5/2021 7:45:00 AM Dear Ani, I have missed you and am happy reading your lovely lines! A dance for sure I sway, sway gently to your soul's sweet song. Belated Congratulations..Big hugs .. Be well. Blessings, Susan :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/26/2021 2:53:00 PM A beautifully descriptive waltz wave, Anitha! I wasn't expecting that ending and it gave me a chuckle. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/26/2021 9:03:00 AM Well there was this one, but I already congratulated you here. Are you entering Brian's contests? He is giving lots of wins lately. I hope you will enter some of your beautiful poems into his contests! (like that pantoum you wrote. I think you wrote one, didn't you?) Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 6/24/2021 9:31:00 PM I am coming back to congratulate you. It's beautiful work. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/24/2021 5:44:00 PM Your poem was one of my very favorites in this form, Anitha. Back with my congratulations. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 6/24/2021 2:37:00 PM Congratulations on your contest win, Anitha. You desreve it with this very well penned poem. Blessings and regards Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/15/2021 2:28:00 PM Curses on those who crush the rose! As you know from my FB pictures, I adore roses and I really like your tribute to the rose right here!! Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:29:00 PM Yes I know my dear friend... Thank you for your lovely comment... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 6/15/2021 7:34:00 AM I read christuraj Alex comments below. Hope all is well with you. Take care Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:28:00 PM Why Rama... Am ok my friend... Thank you.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex Date: 6/15/2021 2:13:00 AM Wonderful. How are you? Keep well. Praying. Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:27:00 PM Thank you Christuraj.. Am ok.. God bless.. ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/15/2021 1:12:00 AM I used to be a good dancer. Should I come to dance with you? Alas, now I'm old. Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:26:00 PM Ha.. Thank you for the visit and comment Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani

Alexis Y. Date: 6/14/2021 8:25:00 PM Hi Anitha, This is a good entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:26:00 PM Thank you Alexis... You too have a great day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Regina Mcintosh Date: 6/14/2021 6:33:00 AM Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 6/16/2021 11:25:00 PM Thank you Gina... Hugs.. ~ Ani