Rose Bush

frost covers aged rose petals stiffened by falls chill sun makes it like glass

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Tuesday Harmon

Date: 10/24/2023 5:44:00 PM

Very beautiful

Tuesday Harmon

Date: 10/24/2023 5:43:00 PM

This is beautiful

Karen Croft
Date: 10/24/2023 7:02:00 PM

Thank you

Julian Santos

Date: 10/24/2023 9:13:00 AM

beautiful imagery :)

Karen Croft
Date: 10/24/2023 9:29:00 AM

Thank you

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 3:17:00 AM

"Frost covers aged rose" Oh my, what a breathtaking haiku poem with whimsical imagery, absolutely so fascinating with wintery theme.. "Petals stiffened by fall's chill" Your word-choices are impeccable.. "Sun makes it like glass" Woww love that, truly enjoyed reading this :)

Karen Croft
Date: 10/24/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed