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Rope's End

Hold onto what is right
Let the unimportant frayed, fragments fall
Hope for hope's sake
Stare into renewal
Leave, cares away
Leave?

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Richard J. Long

February 4, 2010 at 7:02 AM

Doris, what an inspiring point of view.

Gypse Summers

February 2, 2010 at 1:39 PM

Like the whole ending with a question mark really good and original write Doris

Marty Owens

January 31, 2010 at 6:12 PM

This had helped me feel better this evening...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 31, 2010 at 2:11 PM

Absolutely YES... u are all my friends and extended "family"... and its all about the POETRY .. not PERSONALITIES... thankxxx for asking Doris... your spirit is glowing...luv.. Linda-Marie..

John Freeman

January 30, 2010 at 4:12 PM

Let the rough edges drag sometimes is all one can do, but hold on to what one knows is right is the key. "Having done all to stand, stand therefore!! (Eph. 6:13&14) God bless, Doris, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Daver Austin

January 30, 2010 at 10:55 AM

Detachment...yes! Like this one mucho. Love,daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 29, 2010 at 5:34 AM

Your poem is appropriate for my departure from the Soup.. just wanted to say a big thankxxx to u for being a wonderful friend and supporting my poetry... I have posted more information on my last poem here..if u care to read... shall miss u and Sara both.. thankxxx for everything and please keep in touch... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Margaret Foster

January 28, 2010 at 4:30 PM

Good advice Doris, all to often unimportant things get in the way and muddy the waters... This was a pleasure to read... Thank you for your kind comments today.. I hale from Scotland but have lived in beautiful Australia for a long time...Margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 28, 2010 at 9:25 AM

Excellent writing today from you Doris. Keep them coming. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

January 28, 2010 at 4:38 AM

We all need hope. Keep the hope filled pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Mom

Daniel Cheeseman

January 27, 2010 at 11:06 PM

Sound advice Doris well put, thanks for your suppor Daniel

Colleen Bono

January 27, 2010 at 6:17 PM

If it was only that easy.Nicely written.I posted a new poem.hope all is well with you.

Charmaine Chircop

January 27, 2010 at 4:31 PM

Yes leave is a good idea when one hope for hope's sake..beautiful message..Holding Onto what is right and what makes Us Happy..good poem indeed..Charma