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Image result for pictures of 4 generations of women's hands

roots' veins

ancient tree roots gnarled by earth's storms' stresses hands' veins show
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Great analogy, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 4:49 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K.
Maverick Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 1:24 PM
Our bodies were taken from the earth And formed by God Sara, we reflect Earthly things, in our flesh and our spirit Strives for eternity and the things of Everlasting, A very good poem i find.'
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 4:29 PM
Yes, God is our creator, and we age because mankind brought sin into our bodies, so they do go downhill. Thanks for stopping by, Joe, your comments add a special dimension. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 3:45 AM
Your use of metaphor and imagery works in tandem to generate a striking picture, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 4:27 PM
Lasaad, thank you for your understanding comments. Sara K.
Canerdy Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:10 AM
Excellent, moving comparison, Sara! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit and uplifting review. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 11:48 PM
Immaculate this one, Sara. Every aspect of it works so well. Thanks for submitting this Senyru, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 4:42 AM
Howard, comments appreciated. Sara K.
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