Roots

Ruth by the window;

eating an  yogurt...

it's hurts the road of memory.

allegorymemorymetaphorpsychologicalspiritualhaiku

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Alkas Poetry

May 5, 2019 at 2:36 PM

Imagery, well done,,, inteligente jogo de palavras... salute alkas

Poet Destroyer A

March 17, 2016 at 11:56 PM

nice to see this one again, Vanessa. LINDA

Skat A

January 14, 2016 at 9:24 PM

hope to see you back this year... SKAT

Skat A

March 16, 2014 at 2:33 PM

Vanessa, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 16, 2014 at 2:02 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Vanessa :) - I choose your first well written haiku poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Johnny Rhinem

March 16, 2014 at 10:15 AM

† Ruth, Her Daughter's Biblical Ancient Child ˜ Yes, But The Pleasing Sweetened Yogart Alleviates A Reprieve If Merely This Moment; It's Gray Place And Won't Of Dreams She Seems ˜ Sitting At Love's Window ˜ My Love, Always, John

Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2014 at 10:05 AM

Vanessa, a deep haiku... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

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