Carol Mitra Poet Verse

Roots

Roots
                                       deeply
                                    embedded

                          the blood connection
                        standing beside you firm
                           foundation of family
               
                 No reason to fear the strong wind.



13.09.2020
Pyramid poem

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Paul Callus September 22, 2020 at 1:37 PM Excellent, Carol! A strong buildup and a superb end line. Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul Carol Mitra September 22, 2020 at 7:33 PM Thank you Paul....much appreciated.

JC Brul September 20, 2020 at 6:18 PM I love this piece...heart-warming... Congratulations!! Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 7:01 PM Thanks JCB....much appreciated. Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 7:00 PM Thanks JCB....much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 1:37 PM Wonderful, and congrats. Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 6:59 PM Thanks dear Andrea much love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 12:31 PM - Roots are strong in the storm - Congratulations on your win, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 6:57 PM Thanks dear Anne-Lise....much love:)

Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 11:41 AM Very nicely done Carol, Congrats on your win.. Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 6:56 PM Thanks Joseph.....much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 10:51 AM I really love your closing line and pulling it close. Congrats Carol on the 1st. Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 6:55 PM Thanks dear Jeanne....much love.