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Rooting For 8 To 5

As a child I laid on grass evergreen With tresses expanding across vibrancy of nourished hills. But it was there my body decayed prematurely With stabbed chest, ashen air shortening life’s stages; Now, men beg for lost comfort— prayers unanswered. Contest: Rooting For 8 To 5 5 Jan 2016 submitted to nette onclaud

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Date: 1/10/2017 3:59:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Ashley. The second line has great imagery.
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Date: 1/9/2017 2:01:00 PM
ouchie but so amazingly, realistically written... sweet congrats ashley and thanks for joining!
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Date: 1/4/2017 4:42:00 PM
This poem was dark and sad but so well written. A very creative piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/4/2017 12:43:00 PM
This painful reality leaves a lasting mark of warning to us. Powerful poem from your plume!Best wishes.
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